Do you mind if I remix this track for a different genre?
Again with the crazy strings.
And two different ones this time if my ears are correct. I really don't know where you come up with your titles, maybe you should stop asking your mom? The drums come in very exquisitely and fill this piece nicely. The strings do get a bit tiring though, until that little solo or whatever you want to call it. Near the end the strings get a bit out of hand and outweigh everything else going on though.
thats why i remixed it
Just some thoughts...
I was expecting more thatn an endless loop. When the drums finally came in i thought "Finally" something new.
When you sqitched with that sudden brake, it was kinda unexpected. If you made this move and bounce and be mroe fluid, i would download it, but as of now, i want to see some more movement.
Also i like the first maybe 15 seconds after the switch and that was interesting.
THe last switch i think (The third one) sounds good, just make sure not to loop it to many times cause then it just makes your ears hurt.
The 4th transition was good. this sounds like a good place to close.... but you seem to be over killing on it.... wait nvm i see you were fading out...
Othe than that, its a pretty decent piece. Keep at it.
hmmm ok i over did it
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.