I absolutly love it
Your intro was a bit long, but not like that's a bad thing. I personally think the distorted rhythm guitar part is rather catchy.
I really think this song would kick ass with chainsawesqe drums and some crazy synths. Most of my stuff is a work in progress.
the writing is good.
the last guy mentioned turning up the distorted guitar.
but it sound like you scooped your mids out.
it would cut through better if you left in some mids.
crunchy is good, but crunchy and chunky is better :).
Thanks man ive been tweaking my sound and my tunings, my newer stuff will sound better i promise.
That was pretty darn good. The intro sounded sweet, and you wailed on the distorted portion. The only piece of criticism I had was to turn up the volume a bit on the distorted. Other than that, fantastic job. It's guitarists like you, make me wish you lived here. lol
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.