Whatusernamedood had some good points, but I think it's a good thing to remember bass doesn't need to be a constant presence in even a DnB song, Drum and Bass can be heavy and sub-focused(leans towards drumstep or trap) or drum focused with balanced out bass(typical DnB, vocal DnB, breakcore) Or Even -very- light on bass focusing on atmosphere(Liquid DnB, some vocal DnB, leaning into IDM). Yeh you are quite light on bass to the point you are missing something, but if you took whatever shit EQ job you did on the piano and fixed it, you'd have a very full track. I believe what Whatusername is referring to when he mentions the phase going down is "phase cancellation" which can cause your signal to reduce in gain against your will because of two opposing phase directions colliding(basically), a Compressor could fix with or you could fiddle with your settings to avoid that particular offset.
The intro is painfully generic, especially when you come in 50 seconds later with a pretty okay pickup, after you've abandoned the pop chord structure for a more bass-music oriented one.
My suggestions, Research Mixing, A lot of people have some pretty good tutorials on youtube and even around here, it'll give you a HUGE edge. Research more into writing melodies and leads, it'll give you the freedom to keep your macrostructures(song parts) going for longer and groove building to greater heights. Stop overusing that lowpass shit, it makes your music sound lower quality when you're dipping out every 32 bars, one build? fine, A second build or breakdown? fine. 3+ times a song is pushing it.
You're doing good, keep it up.