== This is an NGAUC Audition Round Review. ==
Oh my god... I don't know how you knew, but I have a secret love of stoner rock. Kyuss is such a great band. But I digress. After the really epic and amazing opening (those drums!), I feel like the song stagnates - it takes a little too long to evolve and keep going, and the riff is repeated a little too often. Eventually we get into a solo at 4:14, but it needs to be more compelling. The little motif that we get into 5:45 is exactly what I wanted - it's a great riff with a brooding feel! But it needed to come a few minutes earlier. (I also wish you would have built it up more and outro'd on it - it's a very strong riff - but that's just me.) Good work, but needs a tighter arrangement. Score: 8
Mini-scores (See http://johnfn.newgrounds.com/news/post/936953 for what this means and how to improve)
* Composition: 3/4
* Arrangement: 2/4
* Mixing: 3/4
I am impressed!
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