This is a VERY bittersweet song, more sweet than bitter luckily, but still very bittersweet!

-The main tune is REALLY CATCHY and sounds great... But it repeats way too much...

-The ending is great... but seems just a little sudden...

-The build-up was pretty good... At the expense of being WAY TOO LONG!

-The drop sounds AWESOME! But the drums are too quiet and it would sound SO MUCH BETTER, 5 star worthy even, if they were loud enough...

Overall, this is a great start, a perfect start even! Because even though it has flaws and some of them stick out... That means you'll learn a lot from your mistakes on this song without it ending up a trainwreck so you've learned the dos and don'ts without to making a failure...

Trust me, when I did Scratch my first game was a trainwreck, nearly unplayable and then I ended up making something that got 3,600 plays! You have a bright music making future ahead of you I feel...

Your songs have started out good and become better with each and every upload... I can't wait for your 5th song...

This is for sure much more my style of music! Its really nice! not disturbing at all, has a really nice tune to it and i love the kinda bit trip run you are running in the background! I love all of it! Good going with mixing in the guitar in the middle. I think you did really well with this, it continues to be good it does not become boring ^_^
Keep em coming!

And to the rude guy under... Get some manners.. you can point mistakes out but don't call peps stupid for it... People make mistakes. get over it.

Good ol' Ichavasse. The name in which the first letter is an uppercase i and TOTALLY not a lowercase L. Knocking off half a star because i'm not the biggest fan of the percussion at 1:28.

Also, "What is this, Like, My 3th Space themed song?" It's 3rd, not 3th. u a stupid dum boi