Finally..

An acually good song. Keep making more like this and you might acually be called a respectable music author. The drums really help the song out alot and the not fucking around part helps too.

Yeah

That's a funny jam. If you were serious though, you'd go get some decent mics and a cool audio interface so that you could take it to the next level of clowning! You're lyrics were funny but I could barely hear them. Keep working! Peace!