Right now its not that good

Since you submitted it to see what NG had to say, well...

You need to change all you drum sounds. Try to go for a kanye type of feel to the songs. Listen to some of his stuff, to get an idea. The piano needs some more EQ'ing and a chorus maybe with panning. The strings you got going, id introduce a cello to make the sound pop you know? after that i would try to mix and master the whole song to polish it so it will sound professional.

As it stands right now, the song is not that good, but i see some potential in it. Keep working at it!

-Allen
check my songs when you can, and review some. id like to know what you think of them.