Pretty good

Liked it, very smooth, no spikes which make you jump or just me, nevermind.
Less mucking about and you could be onto something.

has potential

very good but could be even greater

woah, I just starting listening to random NG songs

and this one is great. LOTS of potential. it had a score of 3.00 after 4 votes, I gave it a 5 bringing it to 4.49 ~:>

((( NEEDS IMPROVEMENT )))

This needs some improvement, it sounds like you were messing a around with the song a lot and lost most of its main beat, but the sounds and all were very good and original, just improve on it a bit, it was nice to listen to though...

~X~