Right, you realise your lead guitar isn't even playing in the same key as the rhythm? IT SOUNDS AWFUL!!!!!! Brush up on your theory or just experiment more before you post something. Otherwise, i think the effort is there, but it really sounds like you need teaching.
Not half bad...untill
Untill that goddamn soloing guitar comes in. Its quite terrible. Put on some distortion and stop bending the strings for it. You should actually write a solo before you record. Make up a melody and use it for the solo. Just don't do whatever it is you were doing for it.