good song.

The beggining is not nice at all, anyway the song is cool.

Yeah

I couldn't agree w/ Atheme more. speed it up and make all the noises a little more high pitched, my opinion.

I call BS

I'm calling your bluff! As old as this submission may be, with some work it can hold a place on the all time best.

I would start with reassessing the sounds you used and make it a tad faster in tempo.