Cut down on the wobble and mix up with some relevant stabs instead (an example being when you cut it a few times and insert the gun reload sound clip).
Could have been longer, too, so you could have added more variety to the track.
Not bad at all. I mean this isn't my style of music but hey music is music. You keep up the good work ;)
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.