Sounds like a good start to a chill tune! I really like how the vocal fx started to pan after the stabs came in. The stereo effect on the snare was a nice touch, and I really prefer to hear them on the side a little bit in a mix. The plucking guitar sounding instrument kind of adds a little bit of a pop feel to the track, and I'm totally digging it. :D
As for things I think you should watch out for if you decide to follow through with this, the first thing I noticed was how many of the other instruments were sitting in the mix. Towards the end of the track, you've got three different instruments playing in close proximity on the middle EQ spectrum: the piano, the stabs, and the E. piano sounding synth that fills in every few measures. I would probably try to EQ down one or two of those instruments in the lower middle end so you can avoid having a muddy sounding mix.
Also, I think you should try to make the vocal samples a little more prominent/louder, as I find them to be the most unique sound in the track. These are just my opinions. Good luck!
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