pretty good but it needs 2 be more silly if u want it 2 b da themesong!still good!
...I can't see this as a tankmen theme song.
still better than what i can do!
Well, what do we have here.
Excellent. Excellent. Excellent. The beginning was a bit slow but after a while... woo boy this piece was doing great.
EXTREMELY original. I loved this. I ALMOST laughed (i'v never laughed from any musical piece in my life except 1)
This was ever-changing, ever-moving into a pshycotic state of retardness. I loved it. This would be a wonderful tankmen theme. This is also a great first piece and I can't wait to see how you do with your own original works.
The only thing that was really a low score was your clarity. Many times sounds could not be heard and some things blended together.
Still, a wonderful piece and it barely dragged you down.
Clarity/Sound Quality: 6
Good luck in the MAC6 August Contest. Your definately in my top 3 picks. ^^
Wow man... hehe...thnx a lot for the review. It was very flattering, I'm happy you liked my composition :D
On the clearity issue, I agree, and hope it's something I will get better at during future work.
Nice first submisson!
This is a pretty cool song. Superdrummer already noted some problems down like the marching sounds and all. The only thing that i have to add is that the trumpets volume was a bit too loud in the part towards the end, where everything else in the background is hard to hear.
On the good side, your song is diverse. The intro is nice, what i liked about it the most is the little 3 high notes the guitar plays. All in all it's a good song and you seem to know what you are doing so just keep on submitting songs.
Good luck with the contest man.
Hey General Leo. Thnx a lot for the review. Like I wrote to SuperDrummer, my masteringskills just ain't the best. So I'm very greatfull for all the pointers I can get on that issue :)
Very cool that you noticed the 3 high guitar notes, because I really like that detail myself ;)
Wow, for just submitting to Newgrounds, I can tell you're not a n00bie at all! You've got lots of diverse sound effects, and a great composition. Your ending rocks man! You too have a serious chance at getting into a Tankman submission, me thinks. Then again, a lot of us artists have a chance, since we're all pretty good.
A couple of pointers however...
-Your crash cymbal was irregular, it didn't ring out, it just stopped. Give it some suspension or something.
-The marching sound you had in there seems to distort with the snare. I don't know how to fix that one though, sorry : (
-Nice first submission, and into a MAC6 as well!!!
-Check my audio, especially "Dreamerz: Machines Will Fall"
Hey SuperDrummer, thnx a lot for the review. I really appreciate your pointers, and I agree with you. When it comes to mastering I'm really kind of n00bish, so I need this kind of feedback to improve. My biggest flaw when it comes to the clarity issue, I guess is that I love the multibandcompressor.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.