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*Updated Version (Improved drums, elongated song, added new sounds)

Hey! This is an attempt at a pop-edm song. If you have any suggestions on how to make it sound better please I would love to hear!


i kinda liked this.
i give you MAJOR points because alot of new (and old artists) use fl stock kicks and claps, and gladly you didn't *phew*

this was interesting, i feel like a less puncher kick would sound nicer. also try to get some cool patterns going, a kick on every 4th step and a clap on every 8th gets boring, you want to keep your listeners in, most zoom out after they hear the same pattern.

also, nice melodies, you should experiment with all sorts of synths, i feel like a different synth would complete this more.

honestly, great job with this. would definitely like to hear this updated.

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adonnias responds:

Wow, thanks W00tw00! I see what you are saying about wanting to keep listeners in and changing up the kick and clap with another pattern. I'll also experiment with different synths and update this song with a new file once I get the time :) Thanks again for the feedback.

not bad at all. for a dance song it will be goof if the kicks was with bass, it would make the song even better, but in overall its really good.

VG remaker

adonnias responds:

Thanks for your constructive criticism! We are currently working on it some more. Good suggestion too. I will put the kick with the bass

Nice and cozy :). Great song! I don't really have a great taste of music, so that's why I do not know how to make it better. But great song anyway!

adonnias responds:

Thank you! I'm happy to hear that :) my friend who helped me out will be happy to hear as well !!

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Credits & Info


Dec 22, 2014
10:50 AM EST
File Info
4.8 MB
5 min 3 sec
2.99 / 5.00

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