I have played this song three times now and all in all, I like the sound. However, I feel that this song has too many things going on, specifically in the lower register, and because of that it kind of takes away from the melody.

The atmosphere in this work is well-established; I was able to listen to and appreciate all of the subtle intricacies behind your composition and instrumentation, which was particularity enjoyable because of your conscious effort maintain a balanced tone throughout. To be honest, it was hard to me to fathom what I listened to in that respect. Your use of percussion and bass in your motifs renders the tone ambiguous, but this what unifies the entire work.

Good work.