I love the song, I especially love at around 0:56 or 0:53 how you build up all the tension and it drops, leaving the listener to assume there is a victor. And then it is like the peace after a battle. For everyone to celebrate and recover for what they just went through, great song and looking forward to more songs from you!
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Inspired by reading about the Spanish Navy. The title is Latin for "Lone War Ship." I hope you enjoy it!
SJS21 responds:
K1mrbullet, that was exactly the picture that I was trying to paint, and I'm so glad that you picked up on it! Thank you for taking the time to listen, and definitely for your feedback. It's appreciated!
Would like to hear more dynamic contrast to build up tension. I pretty much mean I would like more crescendos. At first, I didn't like how it ended. The tension wasn't resolved. But thinking back, I actually like the fact that you ended it with those notes. It gives the listener incentive to imagine what comes next...
-czery
SJS21 responds:
I appreciate the constructive feedback, CzeryWassierSwizier! After listening to the track again, I can hear what you mean. I will take this into consideration for my next track. I am self-taught in nearly all aspects of music, so feedback like yours is appreciated, as it helps me develop my skill-set. Thanks for listening!
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