You need some structure to this. It's just loops being gay and random, I mean seriously.
Make some melodies, and even if those loops ARE all yours, you can use them in a better way. :(
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Sounds awesome, but needs some mastering.
Right away, this song sounds awesome... I like everything in it!! It would be cool if it was longer though :) You probably can do it with a little time. So... it sounds cool, but it's too quiet! I'm new to newgrounds, but I hear you can partner up with people to make tracks?? Well if you would like I can help you make that sound fuller/louder/warmer. It's up to you, nicely done though.
yeah i would appreciate some help. im relativley new and i need all the collabaration i can get.