Classic!

Individual parts sound great... separately... really,
but the song feels too long for me, i feel that parts are too long,
probably due to the timing structure of the melody, i always feel
like "this one" should be the last 'pattern' of the section, or the
next melody segment should have significantly more energy.

Anyways, listenable with joy.

'pattern' - one melody segment, often repeated, could be with
variations like 'pattern A_a' and 'pattern A_b'

PS:
When i hear the melody of verses and choruses, The Game
Theorists YT Intro comes to my mind ( even though the themes
are really different ) for some reason... XD