almost as good as nirvana!

it lacks just more variety and voices. (preferably male)

I like this much, much better than the other one, in which I hope you've improved on by now. :)

This is something funky, for sure. Nice job with the guitars! That hard hitting beat's pretty good too. Sounds like something from a retro video game. I really like the beats you've arranged.

This doesn't sound very metal to me. This is more like a hard funk track to me. If you seek to do metal, you should search for a gritty sounding electric guitar, or something similar to that.

Pretty dope sound, bro.