i would use some more drums in the beginning
and maybe some lightweight leads all over you know?
to fill the spaces. i think this is a very creative melody and combination of different leads takin over. but just with a little more background filling it would be perfect.
keep it up!

interesting effects and melody even tho the build up is quite long, the slight drop could use more work, something to make it feel like it has more impact, a massive wobble or something, nevertheless, very nice work! i like it :)
- Pandasticality

The hats in this song need work. The rest of the drums are rather good. I would suggest using more synths and pads, and perhaps some more percussion in the intro.