Robox - Simplicity
First Impression; "I've heard this before"
First off, The score might seem low and all.
But I'll try to justify each and every score so you won't get offended, and if you want to go somewhere with your music, build on.
First off, The originality was a major bummer, as this is one of the FLStudio preset melodies, with some added things. Even though it's the first time I've heard it being used, it's not your melodic piece.
The clarity was pretty good, but even though it's ambience, you should equalize a bit more.
You can try a bit with either Parametric EQ or EQUO.
I think you caught the whole ambience feel pretty well, but there was little change, as with most ambience. Even though most people stick with the same style overall, there should be more than one pattern being played with some minor changes.
It's pretty well executed, but I see alot more potential in you than this.
And because you really didn't put too much effort into the chord-lines, it's a bit lowered.
I hope you can take constructive critiscm, and are willing to improve on these things.
For any questions regarding technical things at FL, or compositional theory, just PM me.
Wouldn't mind a review or two over at my page :)
Thanks for the review.
It was getting kind of late and I decided to cut it off and what I had sounded good to my ears so I decided to submit...
Your 4 vote for originality is totally justified because I didn't make many changes to "Tangerines"...
Though this piece still may have a few downloads, I think it might sound good in like a mind game or something like that...Who knows?
I'd have to agree its not one of my better works.
-Thanks again for the review