Brings a lot of slow, emotion to you open a quarter of the song. Very beautiful piece.
Pretty simple yet turned out very good. Honestly it sounds like one of those game-overs on video games.
Some parts just sounded too low of a tune, like dull-type. That was only in 2 parts worth 8 seconds though. Not a huge biggy but oh well. Like you said, you didn't have time to work on it.
Keep it up!
(what flavour is the sundae?)