Oh yes!

Oh I love it! It's a simple song and allows one to take out each beat easily and see it's individual beauty. I think simplicity rather than diverseness is something to look for. This particular song gives a sort of eeriness. To me at least. I like these sorts of songs. Are you really only 13 years old?

Totally Awesome

Very well done! I love the beat. I could see this song as someone's theme song. I just have to DL this. Great job =)

cool

pretty weird, i think it's more of trance than micellanious, but i like it. good work.

Needs more fillers

I agree, your songs all seem to have 1-2 things going on at one time. At least in the middle of the song you should have a bass line, a lead, and some drums.

Keep at it.

The guy below said it all

just make it more diverse...meaning make a shit load of crap goin on at a time!!!

good job next time you make somthing keep in mind all this stuff poeple advise you to do...