Somewhat.

You're getting really good ideas, you're just not translating them right. This is okay, but I do agree with Noe3. Maybe if you tried making a build-up with the organ tune, a little deeper bass, not so bright a synth around 1:18, you could even try making it more trumpet than synth if you want, and as for the triplet eighth notes, make them a bit deeper as well. Try extending the song too okay? WOuld you try those things please?

man this is sick music i auctully fell to sleep

man your music is the best all i can say is i had to listen to this music when i had an assignmet due the next day any way best music ive heard in a long time keep at it

nice

i like how it sounds! urmusic kicks butt!! *thumbsup*
5/5 n 10/10
~phonixdragon98

Awesome!

the intro was kickass

well

It started off perfect, seting up the song really nicely... But then I began noticing that it was sounding skippy, like the parts weren't put close enough together like when a loop restarts, there is that little seam... When the main synth started it also seemed like notes were clashing at places... As for the ending, I liked it.

Keep it up.