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Just the start of some kind of song. I'll brush up on the melody later, but for now I want to see what people think of it.
Please be brutally honest in any reviews. :)


really nice melody, at first it felt like something that would be played in a royal palace or something, its volume is really low even though i got everything turn'd up high, nice piece.
- Pandasticality

asid61 responds:

Thanks for your opinion! Yeah, it is a bit quiet. I didn't notice it while I was making it because I had the volume turned up all the way.

I'll have to agree with Rich on this one. I can't really say I'm finding any bad notes in this song, however it's like it's not really going anywhere. It almost seems like you can't decide on what melody to stick with so you keep alternating between them. People expect a song to have some sort of destination, to follow a road. And when you keep waiting for it to happen and realize it's not really going anywhere it leaves a bit of a nasty aftertaste. Even if there is no actual problem with the harmonies and with how the notes tie up with each other.

asid61 responds:

Thanks for the input!
It's not gong anywhere right now; it's just an idea and an experiment with chords and piano. I will for sure come up with a main melody soon.
I know what you mean by songs going somewhere. My favorite kinds of songs are cinematics, which tell a story. Again, I'll figure stuff out as I go. Add some transitions and melody.

Interesting piece. It's pleasant on the ears and has some nice chords, but it is all over the place. It is almost random at best, so I would consider fleshing out a actual structure. Also maybe use more variety in rhythm. Overall I think you have a decent start.

asid61 responds:

Thank you! I was mainly looking at the chords here and seeing if I have somewhere to go. Just an idea right now.

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4.00 / 5.00

Aug 11, 2014
12:58 AM EDT
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1.6 MB
1 min 10 sec

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