really nice melody, at first it felt like something that would be played in a royal palace or something, its volume is really low even though i got everything turn'd up high, nice piece.
- Pandasticality

I'll have to agree with Rich on this one. I can't really say I'm finding any bad notes in this song, however it's like it's not really going anywhere. It almost seems like you can't decide on what melody to stick with so you keep alternating between them. People expect a song to have some sort of destination, to follow a road. And when you keep waiting for it to happen and realize it's not really going anywhere it leaves a bit of a nasty aftertaste. Even if there is no actual problem with the harmonies and with how the notes tie up with each other.

Interesting piece. It's pleasant on the ears and has some nice chords, but it is all over the place. It is almost random at best, so I would consider fleshing out a actual structure. Also maybe use more variety in rhythm. Overall I think you have a decent start.