It's PRO YO!!

Sounds like a professional song. It's got a good tempo, a good melody and drum beat, and most importantly, you put all the great elements together in a good form.

really good

nice riffs,
but it would be way heavier with chords.
just make the same riff with the same instruments one octave lawer, and another 5 steps lower, and you wil get that heavy guitar sound better.

Offspring reminder

It kinda reminded me of a ringtone i found on the interweb :) also known as t he offspring's 'Kids Arent Alright*. With your next piece of work, Try to make is as original as possible. Maybe try new beats, new distortions, new sounds altogether. I not saying its bad either. its much better than any of my music.

Punk-O-Matic Inspiration...?

I get the feeling that you were inspired by Punk-O-Matic somewaht when you created this. It was a good song; I lvoe teh drumming. But it'sa bit short, and it loops over itself. Oh, and the guitars don't really sound like guitars.

.frenZy.