I really like this piece. It has a very nice feel to it. I agree with the previous commenter about the clipping, though. Try to avoid that in your future work. But overall very good. Keep composing.
I like this one. I was wondering if you could clarify something for me. It sounds to me either that your kick might be clipping or you placed some sort of distortion on it. If it was distortion, just as a suggestion, I would recommend filtering the distortion with an EQ-cutting all frequencies below 6k and focus around bringing out the frequencies around 8k-11k as those are where you get a good click from the beater on a kick drum. I noticed that currently it's masking some other parts. It's very subtle, but I think it will make your mix sound even better!
Your right! :o
I wanted them to hit hard cause they weren't loud enough and now they cut everything else off
I'll remember that