This isn't bad.

It's not great either.

This needs some sort of change-up like a hook or a b-section.

The same melody used all the way throughout the track gets real old real fast.

If you'd like some pointers feel free to check out my tracks and leave me a pm or twelve.

I'll give this a 6/10 for effort.

Keep at it man!

Practice makes perfect!

~NGHH~