Makes sense to me. The guy below simply doesn't know what he's talking about. It makes sense if you aren't retarded.
This is a one take of an unfinished song for my new band. The Lonely.
Here's the deal.
The Lonely.
Zac - Guitar/vocals
Craig - Bass/vocals
Sebastian - Drums.
Like Glass.
Illusion, of something free but faded,
Confusion, how can something hurt so much but mean so little?
I'm cold now, I've walked this earth without a heart for so long,
The Broken hearted are the walking dead,
But I'm ready to live again,
I'm breaking, piece by piece I know by how,
I'm shaking, It's in my bones and cold,
Alone, the price of making prayers when living with devils,
It's hell now and I miss you every day,
I'm praying to god, "wont you kill me?"
Finally show me some mercy,
I've been living a lie for a lifetime,
I'm too guilty to start again,
Mirrors feel like murder,
Like I'm trapped inside a tomb,
With this monster that is me,
Makes sense to me. The guy below simply doesn't know what he's talking about. It makes sense if you aren't retarded.
I dont get it. during the first part you say youre ready to live again but in the second part youre asking to die. I think there needs to be third part to the song.
Hence, "a one take of an unfinished song". This is a verse and a chorus. Thanks for the review.
Yea!!! Too short to be awesome tho. I think if you let the Lead guitar "Rock It" a bit more, as with the vocals, you'd have a more improved song. Like, Janes Addiction's scratchy vox, but with yo own flavor!!! :D Have TOO much fun yo!!!
Thanks man! Like it says it's a one take of something still in the works. I just tracked a whole album though, so if you like this be sure to check in very soon!
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.