well... what more can i say.... this has to be one of the best songs ive ever heard... and thats sayin somethin!!
Well, okay, you tried, but honestly, this is one of the less imaginative tracks I've heard on the audio portal. There's really nothing exciting here; it's mostly just a drum track with the "big bag" tagline repeated many times over it. The little bit of music that was added felt tedious and dull. I wasn't impressed with the overall *feel* of this song.
For a first submission, I suppose it's not terrible, but I'm sure you can do better than this. Some more original music, som interesting effects, or some variety in the beats would help this a lot.