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My second track and this time in EDM and trance. like always any review can help my out

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The atmosphere of this track is amazing! Good job.

The leads and synths are good but they could be better,
maybe to small high frequency and reverb.
2:00 What a nice sidechain effect, respect.
The mainpart is really good. Hats are nice too but
the crash in 4:00 and 2:45 sucks you have to replace it.
Try to add explosion fx on the intro.
Really good track man. Good luck in subsequent productions. ;)

(I'm not a master of English so maybe I can make some mistakes)

Hey, cool track. On to the review.

Overall, the composition is okay. The mastering needs some work though as the whole song sounds like it was just thrown together. You need to make certain things stand out more than others. The kick for example needs to be more prominent, instead in this example it's more of a suggestion. I also barley hear any cymbals or percussion variation.

While the automations and composition are nice I would have to say you need to work on getting your songs to flow more smoothly, and by smoothly I mean adding more transition effects. They work for the song to glue it together.

All in all, 2.5/5 stars.

Things to work on:
-Mastering (big one here)
-Drum progressions and variations
-Transitions

Keep it up man, you just need some more practice and you'll be pumping out awesome tracks in no time.

OZeros responds:

thank you very much for this helpful advice. i need to work harder on my music especially mixing things.

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Uploaded
May 4, 2014
9:57 AM EDT
Genre
Trance
File Info
Song
3.8 MB
4 min 11 sec

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