Nice Intro, the kicks were kinda ruining it, i am going to completely disagree with tox though about the electric guitar, I think it sound better this way. and about there is where you need to add the kicks, not the intro and some dry bass :D

I am about 2:10 now - The Bass keeps going like bad, it needs some more filtering,
and well slowing down the song at the end was a good idea, but you did it from very early, you should have done it for the last 2 beats or something shorter

Overall I liked it because it is very unique sounding and your piano and progressions were wicked.

the piano and the base drum was a nice choice.
and liked how you kept it all fresh with altering the tone with different instruments but kept the same note structure
i would have increased the electric guitar at 0.45 a few octave to have a greater build up of emotion in your song

i would have dropped the electric guitar at 2.00 through __ a few octave to create a stronger visual for a downed part of your song, coupled with the slowing down piano would make a nice comparison as well

Also then think about adding a climactic note at about 1.50 to signify something has happened to something or an event happened to create a deeper feel to the song

It's a very well done song as it is, but id be interested to see the story that you are trying to put it to,
especially since as it stands it has 2 down sections with a electric guitar,

Love the mix of piano and drum at the start