Looky here...
Well the intention was nice on this track...I like the effort u put forth to attempt a fairly decent piece of auditory work....but maybe its juz me. The overall beat was nice but I felt as if you were using the vocalz to stimulate the listener for lack of a better intro. Not knockin u dawg...juz criticing. Alongside that the voice content wasnt so clear. It was fuzzy and took away from the idea the intro was trying to capture. Overall it was pretty good...keep'em coming...