Pretty interesting. The melody was nice and catchy and I loved the calm intro :D.
The bass synth that comes in at 0:20 was pretty nice as well. Liked how you added some dubstep
elements to it as well :). The mixing was pretty good as well :D.
Wished that you could have this longer and maybe add more sections to it :).
This sounds like something that could be the drop for an Electro House track :D. I recommend that you check out that genre. After listening to some of your other tracks as well, I think you have some talent in making that kind of music :).

I'll scout you, so promise that you will improve and make great tracks ;).
-enochcity