love that bit from 1:00 to 1:16 kinda reminded me of Justice. XD
i also felt that the kick needs a'little more oomph.
in the end I started to tripout after my second listen 'haha' not bad for an unpolished track.
i'm stepping out of my typical house beats and sounds and doing something slightly different. this isn't even it's final form.
it's a piece of shit in progress.
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love that bit from 1:00 to 1:16 kinda reminded me of Justice. XD
i also felt that the kick needs a'little more oomph.
in the end I started to tripout after my second listen 'haha' not bad for an unpolished track.
Must not be my cup of tea. I kept expecting the song to progress, but that beat just seemed to drag out my anticipation into an ultimately disappointing end.
repetitive? yes. your anticipation? i don't know, i'm not sure if you're impatient or pretty chill. i was hoping for reviews that would actually be beneficial to the progress of this music. this just seems like a very opinionated review and in no way presents any kind of idea on how to improve. i suppose i could base the rest of the song to off of your opinionated taste and see where that goes, but then again my opinionated displeasure of your review would probably give me the case of the fuck its. i don't mean to be a dick, but come on, at least recommend something i could do to improve. maybe i could double up one of the kicks or maybe add in some extra percussion somewhere or maybe even a crazy high pitch synth that just blasts through the chorus or whatever. i wish to see reviews on how to improve, not biased judgement based on your taste of music. i do appreciate you taking the time to make an attempt to review this piece. you're more than welcome to pm me with recommendations on how to improve based on your style of music rather than your taste. i'm sure i can learn something from you other than your opinion.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.