I like the blissful vibe at :04, although the drum fill at the intro was a bit cheesy. The chord progression here is pretty generic, although I enjoy the sound design and string melodies. You could’ve used a smoother transition at :36 (even a crash would’ve helped), and I think the drums could’ve been louder in the mix throughout. I like how you combine the guitar and strings towards the end; it’s a good way of adding an element of conclusivity to the piece. That said, the ending is very sudden and I would’ve liked to see more complexity in the arrangement of this piece. You have a pretty consistent energy and volume level throughout, and the harmonic content never changes either. Overall, I like the mood and instruments and atmosphere, but the composition here was pretty bland and the production could use a little more punch. Keep at it, Charmanzer! :)

Mixing, mastering, and balance
1.5/2
Structure, transitions, phrasing, and variety
.75/1.5
Melody, tonality, harmony, and texture
1.5/2
Instrumentation and sound design
.75/1
Emotion, atmosphere, and catchiness
1.25/1.5
Originality and uniqueness
.25/1
Overall (how do the elements above interact?)
.75/1
Composite score
6.75/10

Hello, the song is very nice. I was wondering if you let me use it for a school animation, I will credit you for the song. If you don't want I will accept your decision.

Loving on this track. Really upbeat little medley you have going here. The slower (seriousness part as you called it) run in the middle breaks it up nicely.

The ending is a bit sudden and harsh but that doesn't take away from how nice this is. Top work.

This song has the perfect happy feel seriously I spent an hour on here listening to god knows how many songs intill I found your piece of music. My good sir if I attribute proper credit to you may I use this music for a youtube video?