Very nice melody.
The only ting that is bugging me right now with the song is 1: you are using FL presets, and 2: you have a large amount of distortion in your track. Please don't add delay to heavy kicks =( That causes serious distortion. Take off that delay, and then turn down al of the instruments, and only turn up what you need to hear (kick, melody) only HALF WAY. Then turn everything else up slightly. Don't make things louder to make them heard, make the others quieter so you can make them quieter. It'll really help the quality of the track, it will.
The song is enjoyable other than a bit of distortion =) Keep it up! Could you drop by my auydio page and review a song or two? I'd really appreciate it =D