Very nice melody.
The only ting that is bugging me right now with the song is 1: you are using FL presets, and 2: you have a large amount of distortion in your track. Please don't add delay to heavy kicks =( That causes serious distortion. Take off that delay, and then turn down al of the instruments, and only turn up what you need to hear (kick, melody) only HALF WAY. Then turn everything else up slightly. Don't make things louder to make them heard, make the others quieter so you can make them quieter. It'll really help the quality of the track, it will.
The song is enjoyable other than a bit of distortion =) Keep it up! Could you drop by my auydio page and review a song or two? I'd really appreciate it =D
I don't use as many presets as it sounds, the only thing that was alot of presets was Land of Pixels. This song gargled because I forgot to put the soft clipper in the fx for the bass. The delay of the bass is actually a sound sample bass I got from The Comet, I cannot fix the delay. The sounds I used were already loud to begin with, and turning them half way you can barely hear them. Newgrounds makes it sounds more distorted than it really is. Trust me ;) and I'll take a look at your review. I'll keep in mind about the delayed kicks and find a way to fix it. thx for the review. The full version is better if u want to download it. I might even resend this song to newgrounds with soft clippers and what not for better quality.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.