This is one that could use some sped up pace might be improved with a faster pace the sound was notbad but overall some nice playing here

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ok

well i think you just need to return some basics in chords. sounds like you got a certain them but the chords do not match. then maybe some articulation.

It would have been good but...

I didn't hate it, but i couldn't listen to it all the way through. YOUR GUITAR WAS OUT OF TUNE!! :) I really like the song out of what I was picing together what was in tune, but it was like listening to a cat howl at the moon to the accordian player playing to the teacher scratching the chalk-board. (just re-do it tuned up and you're golden).