This has potential, I think there could be a few more high notes in there though, It almost seams a little anti climactic. Being that the track is a little over 6 minutes some alteration of pitch here or there would do it some good. Keep it up.
Yes, I agree with you. I made it back in '09 when I had less experience with that style. I listened to part of it again recently and thought it could be upload-worthy, but upon listening to it the whole way through I, too, realized it was a little monotonous. But I think I've gotten a little better since then. Thank you for listening and reviewing.