ive listened to this twice now...i dig the hell out of it. good job.
thats great. ;)
You've made it sound more metal, more hardcore by adding rhythm to the guitar voice, while keeping all the positive sides of the previous version.
It feels like the track has become more random, and lost its direction, because there are so many different sounds & sections.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.