So it started out with the staccatos and I liked it. It sounded troublesome and a bit horrific. The held notes kept the same emotion going, but then the bass staccatos just disappeared. The reason I bring that up is that it dropped in the middle of a measure. I understand if maybe you're trying to get me to feel alone with the held notes because I became familiar with the staccato, but it really gave me a negative thought about the music.
After that, the bass staccato comes back, but it's a bit higher. I don't really like how it sounds anymore. It just sounds like it shouldn't be there. When the piano takes that over though, it sounds pretty awesome. The chords that the piano and choir do are beautiful.
I know you know what you're doing, but there's just little things that some people may be bothered by. You know your crap man. This is the second song I've heard from you, and I have been impressed by both. I'm now going to check the rest of your stuff