It's beautiful. Nothing extraordinary, but exactly what it sounds like you wanted it to be. I'm sorry I don't have much to say, I'd love to help but it's a simple piece. This is just beautiful.
Thank you very much for your kind words.
I really appreciate your compliments. It wasn't really a "piece" at all, so much as an improvisation that I happened to catch on recording. Hence the lack of a defined time signature.
But again, I thank you for telling me that something that came directly from my mind's ear is beautiful. That's perhaps the best comment and compliment that you can give a musician. Unless, of course, what they're going for isn't beauty (Threnody for the Victims of Hiroshima).
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.