Did you model this after James Bond?
I felt this song was excellent for someone starting out. As with your first song though I would have made the bass a tad bit softer. Thats just me.
As for VST's, if you got some you could make amazingly powerful pieces. AIM me at the Screenname I PM you and we will talk about them.
Truthfully, I don't use VST's because I don't have the money to spend on them but if you do I highly reccomend getting some.
Look foward to talking to you.
Keep it up.