well, this is nice.
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Written: 17th March 2013
Made with Garageband
more at www.thelamboy.com
VERSE 1
This day is good, but it could be better
this work is good, but it could be better
these comforts are good,
but they could be perfect with You
PRE-CHORUS
I'm anticipating the purity up there
CHORUS
While breathing this air
I'm happy to be alive
with freedom from sin
Your joy's always in supply
but if You were to call me home tonight
I'd throw down this skin
and take up a body of life
with You, where it's better
VERSE 2
This mouth is good, but it could be better
my relations are good, but it could be better
this heart is good in Your eyes,
but it could be perfect with You
BRIDGE
Though I cannot give up on this body I'm within
I can deny my flesh and all ungodly things
This world is fallen and it's wearing me down
but I keep my head in the Saviours love,
I know one day I'll receive a crown
my flesh is fallen, even with a clean soul
one day I'll die, and I will be home
nahtanojmal responds:
Thanks :D
I definitely like the message, but maybe you should try not using the autotune? it tears your voice up, plus your instruments sound kinda off >.>, they all sound completely separate from the song :/, all in all a good song though, I feel like it will come together better :D
nahtanojmal responds:
Hey Thanks for the input ;)
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- 3 min 36 sec
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