Not sure what to say about this song. Just something I did for fun.
I do enjoy experimental tracks like this. It's actually pretty normal for an experimental track, but I guess that's because I'm used to making some chaotic and messed up experimental tracks :P.
The one thing that bothered me, though, were some of the high notes which felt very strange. Some notes were also dissonant, but it was probably intentional.
Guess you could call it experimental pop :P I just didn't know which genre would fit best.
Not sure which high notes felt strange though?
The piano chords at the end were dissonant at the end intentionally if that is what you were talking about, yes.
Thanks for taking the time to listen!
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Well it's very experimental to say the least... I mean there are some nice little melodies in this song, however... In all honesty... it sounds like you just placed patterns places without a care in the world as there was no real flow to the song...
Taking into effect that this song is under the experimental category, I would say it's very fitting... but perhaps you should put more effort into things like this... even if they are experimental.
Hmm, I don't really see much of no flow. Maybe the outro could have been constructed neater, but that's about it for me personally. Thanks for taking the time to listen though.
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.
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