Now this sounds like something I would expect to hear in a Futuristic Adventure or FPS.

While I do admit the delay-driven hat-like sound does sound annoying, that beat you introduced straight away makes the track. The deep and tech-like synth works with it extremely well and I love the timing on it. For some of your darker sounds are you using 8DIO's Free Radicals at all? (Some of your sounds your are using sound very similar to the Kontakt pack).

Mastering-wise, I can't really fault it. From what distortion I am picking up, it's crisp and crushing without it destroying the sounds in the track. Playing the track loudly on my Alesis speakers everythingthing from the low-end to the high-end sounds good to me.

I would be very interested in listening to the full version once it is complete!