Pretty sweet :O. Loved the sub in this.. The melody is awesome and the arrangement is awesome :D. It's awesome :D.
Why is one of the tags tits?
its a tribute to tits. :)
Honestly, it's pretty good for a rushed piece in one-and-a-half hours. I wouldn't be able to pull off a 2:29 track that quickly.
Your mixing is pretty iffy on this though but I'm guessing that quantity/quality happens when a piece is rushed. The whole track sounds incredibly flat like it's either been over-compressed or you EQ'd the High and mid bands down too much. The track sounds like it hasn't been widened enough either.
I would spend a little but of time simply touching up on the mix & master of this and then upload it again. I'm sure it will sound alot better and with the recognisable Deshiel charm
Please contact me if you would like to use this in a project. We can discuss the details.