Oh dear god the propaganda!!
Hmmmm. let's see now. I see what you mean about how it gets a bit choppy - it's a little unsettling - I liked the glitchy little bits thrown in here and there - the panning on the guitar was just a little too harsh - avoid panning extreme hard left or right and it'll feel a little smoother, unless that's what you were going for.
I really wasn't crazy about the propaganda samples -
Honesltly I don't think it's your best work - I'm voting 4/5 on this.
You should advertise it in the forum though to get more reviews and votes!