I liked the melody and instruments and relaxed mood at the beginning. However, I think it would've been more interesting if you played with the dynamic contrast towards the beginning (the instruments gradually got louder in order to create a climax into :58). I liked the part at :58 btw, but I didn't like how the strings got distorted by the percussion/effects shortly after. I liked how you incorporated more instruments into the piece as it went on, like the piano that came in around 2:00. The harmonies were nice, and the structure pretty good too, but you might want to think more about the dynamics of certain instruments, like the melody instrument at around 3:20, which was a little too penetrating for its own beautiful melody. Overall, good piece! Endings are important to me, and I liked how this one ended! Hope this review was helpful, and keep up the good work! ;)
thanks for the tips, i'll make sure to look up on it, and maybe try to remaster it, soon enough.
also this is the first time i've experienced with the more cinematic ochestral style, and your comment are very much appreciated :)
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