nice beat, but gets pretty boring after a while. I suggest that you spice it up sith some instruments at the end. Great job though!
I agree with Aslai, more variation and different Melodie instruments besides the main line would be nice. I love the beat though and it is a great start!
It's got a great start, though it gets fairly repetitive. Try to get some variety in there, either in the instruments used or in the melody.
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